Tuesday, 27 November 2012

call me devil or ready my coffin

oh Lord! call me devil or ready my coffin,
I wanna own my soul and I will,
shading tears in solitude I prefer,
serving morons can never.

agony all around, engulfing innocence,
battling the conflicting mind among pains
all that was eternal are being challenged,
confront me or take life out of me,
stubborn I am, will remain same thee.


all your power and ego, I boycott,
without war how to decide Almighty?
let the swords swing & sing the glory,
Master you are and I wanna be,
Hey God; call me devil or ready my coffin.

Sunday, 18 November 2012

Ultimate Rap


Teri galli ab mei chod chuka,
Aanso sare tere ab jhel chuka,
tune khele jo bhi khel
Wo bhi mein khel chuka
Ab dekhu mujhe kaise satayegi tu?
Mana dus ko aur fasayegi tu,

mera kuch naiyo jata,
O! mera kuch naiyo jata
pachtayegi tu.....

Bahut ho chuka pyar,
Ab Hogi takrar,
Tu rah taiyaar!
Tere kisse sabko sunaunga mein
Tera cehra sabko dikhaunga mein
Jhanse mein aur na aaunga mein

Tu hai kya, O! tu hai kya?
lak guni acchi pataunga mein
Meri duniya se nikal ja tu
ye baat fate ki, smajh ja tu....

Teri galli ab mein chod chuka
Tere pyar ki, O! Tere Pyaaar ki
Baatein saari bhul chuka

O! Terri.. Galli.. Ab... Mein... Chod... Chuka

~Amit Renwi~

Friday, 9 November 2012

Rage! Within the heart

Rage! Rage! Rage! Within the heart
 Each possesses a world, Ha! Faux pas.
Heaven to Hell, Darkness prevailed
Races yearning for bright sunshine.

Rage! Rage! Rage! Within the heart
Doom seems cheeseparing, mayhem
Sandy, Neelam, tsunami are legates
Hope terminated, Death-awe, all humdrum!

Rage! Rage! Rage! Within the heart
Conceit surging, naivety is impotent
Emotions are slaves, alacrity cavort
Almighty!  Ablaze the Flak, I evoke!

Ha Ha! You nitwitted and silly child
Illusion, re-start assumed destruction,
Let pass the wicked winter, wait!
Coming-forth the shining summer.

Fear not! All in the dominance.
Bizarre and a relishing Game,
Incomprehensible my fashions
But the illumination is eternal
And shall prevail.

Rage! Rage! Rage was in heart.
contradiction gone and mind calm.

Sunday, 28 October 2012

The Magic of Shayari

Ek purani tasveer teri sanam, aaj aa gayi nazron ke samne ....
Na Dard naya tha na hi naya tha Gam...
naya hai ye fasana...
Na Tu kam ziddi na kam teri tasveer Zalim...


Bahane kai the tere paas mujhse door jane ke,,,
Gila nahi halaton se,,
ki Ye khata bhi meri thi,,,,
Ik adad wajah na de paya tujhe sath rahne ki.....



Zine de mujhe meri zindagi mere dhag se E-Khuda!,,,,
Ki sahi aur Galat ka hisab tere ghar hi kar lenge...

Tuesday, 23 October 2012

Book Review : I Live for you..

About the Author- Dhanashri Kadam is as young girl  from the city of Dreams Mumbai. She is a Commerce Graduate and perusing French Translator diploma. Her philosophy of life  is:-  If a person has taken birth in the world, he must leave his mark behind (Impressing one ). She is an aspirant writer from a very young age and gave wings to her aspiration in style with "I Live For You." 
About The Book :- " I  Live For You." is a unique story that reviled the funny ways of Love firstly two person in love with two other persons fell in love with each-other and then they hold the bond so tight that even the natural causality or unfortunate incident couldn't part their ways. The concept has the freshness that makes it  readable.
Authorship:-  Dhanashri has used a very simple language and been quite successful conveying her point. Day to day language has given a lucidity to the story, moreover all the events and incidents are very closed to the reality (no disc/pub scenes nor the doge of sex). The beginning of the story is well woven and carries the readers with the flow. The middle could have been much better though but full marks to the climax.
Verdict:- Book is short, clear and has freshness, Should be given a Read.
To, The Author:- Dhanashri Well-done and I congratulate you for making a Mark in the world of Indian Literature. Some serious and meaningful work is desperately expected  from you. And to add to the compliment let me confess that I liked the book despite the fact "I Hate Love Stories".